I think it's a good start. I can definitely see the future plans to adding more characters through the Heroine/Hero, Riker, and the Lion-Phone guy.
I do find the start a bit rushed in. It's nice to have some ambiance, fluff, and backstory to give the Hero/Heroine some character that's not from just from choice boxes alone. Some people might hate it, I think its a personality builder. You always got to balance the aspects of the story. It might also add some unexpended moments for Riker and perhaps some other love interests if there are plans for them. We do have context that she's independent and is working a bar-restaurant and we have a friend in the phone. But other than that, you can definitely expand a bit on that.
Riker has a great start off. Starts off as a customer, turns and whisks you off. As we continue to spend time with him and depending on the choices given, he can be unpredictable, obsessive, and unsettling. I do find the mini-jump scares interesting. It gives him a sense of mysteriousness that there is something more to him that is missing.
Hopefully in the future update you'll expand upon that idea.
First of all, I want to thank you for the time you put into your feedback. I agree with you, the beginning does feel a bit rushed and was technically slapped together as I was learning the ropes of the game engine. Once I have day 4 finished I'll go back and see about adding some more substance to the beginning, see if I can add some more atmosphere and character building as well as different events to hook interest.
I wanted to make Riker an absolute mess of a person internally that can go from one extreme to the next depending on how you respond to him.
Thank you for your input and I'll definitely keep it in mind while I continue the game as well as when I go back and apply finishing touches <3
Riker gives me the creeps/hots at the same time, I love the ominous atmosphere and his 'very' obsessive nature. That scene with the crying was big yikes, I loved it. :D It's quite rare to find dark themed stories like this. Makes me hope for some nsfw scenes.. will there actually be some with Riker? Cannot wait for more regardless!
Hey thank you so much for checking out my game <3 yes I am planning on putting in nsfw scenes with him :3 I'm happy he's giving off those feelings cause I've always loved them myself in stories I've read/games I've played so I definitely wanted to capture that obsessive nature in him. I'll have more out shortly and thank you again ´･ᴗ･`
The use of zoom-ins got me sooo many times. The first use in the bar I was like :O and then I played through my way. On repeat I did a different situation in the bunker and when he jumped into our face again I was like OoO ahaha Love the art style and the ambience it brings to the already interesting text lines!!
Oh gosh thank you so much <333 I'm happy you like it so far, I definitely want to give him the right mixture of hot and creepy af xD Day three is in the works and I'll have an update for the release date soon :3
Played this last night and just had to comment as soon as I got off work today. Riker is so scary😂especially the part where MC is crying. It was exciting tho oops. I'm looking forward to seeing more!
That route is going to be something special :3 at least what have planned for it I hope it will be C": I'm glad you liked it. I'll have it out as soon as possible! Day 3 is going to have so many choices so I hope you'll check it out <3
the artwork in this game is amazing! I find the atmosphere genuinely jarring and suspenseful, even the creepy piano music is a good touch! I can't wait to see where this story goes with Riker- also, Riker is super hot and I love him already. I'm definitely going to play nice with him at first. Please let me know if you get around to making a tumblr blog so I can follow you. <3 eagerly waiting for day 3~!
Thank you for checking out my day 2 update! <3 I'm planning on adding a bunch of branching choices so there will be plenty of ways of interacting with him :3 And of course! Once I get all my socials in place I'll send out an update. Thank you again :D
Oh my goodness thank you <33 I'm happy that you found it disturbing, I'm wanting to make him appear more and more unhinged in certain routes so I'm glad it gave that kind of effect :3 and definitely sounds like something I would want to do, thank you for the advice! I've become quite a bit invested in this project ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ
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I think it's a good start. I can definitely see the future plans to adding more characters through the Heroine/Hero, Riker, and the Lion-Phone guy.
I do find the start a bit rushed in. It's nice to have some ambiance, fluff, and backstory to give the Hero/Heroine some character that's not from just from choice boxes alone. Some people might hate it, I think its a personality builder. You always got to balance the aspects of the story. It might also add some unexpended moments for Riker and perhaps some other love interests if there are plans for them. We do have context that she's independent and is working a bar-restaurant and we have a friend in the phone. But other than that, you can definitely expand a bit on that.
Riker has a great start off. Starts off as a customer, turns and whisks you off. As we continue to spend time with him and depending on the choices given, he can be unpredictable, obsessive, and unsettling. I do find the mini-jump scares interesting. It gives him a sense of mysteriousness that there is something more to him that is missing.
Hopefully in the future update you'll expand upon that idea.
First of all, I want to thank you for the time you put into your feedback. I agree with you, the beginning does feel a bit rushed and was technically slapped together as I was learning the ropes of the game engine. Once I have day 4 finished I'll go back and see about adding some more substance to the beginning, see if I can add some more atmosphere and character building as well as different events to hook interest.
I wanted to make Riker an absolute mess of a person internally that can go from one extreme to the next depending on how you respond to him.
Thank you for your input and I'll definitely keep it in mind while I continue the game as well as when I go back and apply finishing touches <3
Heeh, I'm really enjoying this so far! <3
Riker gives me the creeps/hots at the same time, I love the ominous atmosphere and his 'very' obsessive nature. That scene with the crying was big yikes, I loved it. :D It's quite rare to find dark themed stories like this. Makes me hope for some nsfw scenes.. will there actually be some with Riker? Cannot wait for more regardless!
Hey thank you so much for checking out my game <3 yes I am planning on putting in nsfw scenes with him :3 I'm happy he's giving off those feelings cause I've always loved them myself in stories I've read/games I've played so I definitely wanted to capture that obsessive nature in him. I'll have more out shortly and thank you again ´･ᴗ･`
THIS IS AMAZING
The use of zoom-ins got me sooo many times. The first use in the bar I was like :O and then I played through my way. On repeat I did a different situation in the bunker and when he jumped into our face again I was like OoO ahaha Love the art style and the ambience it brings to the already interesting text lines!!
Oh gosh thank you so much <333 I'm happy you like it so far, I definitely want to give him the right mixture of hot and creepy af xD Day three is in the works and I'll have an update for the release date soon :3
is the lion guy i was texting and riker the same person ?
The Lion guy you're texting is the second love interest that isn't available yet. I'll start working on his route once I've finished Riker's route. (:
I'm really enjoying this, it's unsettling and enthralling, great job! I can't wait for the next installment!
Thank you for checking out my game! :D I'm currently working on Day 3 and will have it out as soon as possible :3
Played this last night and just had to comment as soon as I got off work today. Riker is so scary😂especially the part where MC is crying. It was exciting tho oops. I'm looking forward to seeing more!
That route is going to be something special :3 at least what have planned for it I hope it will be C": I'm glad you liked it. I'll have it out as soon as possible! Day 3 is going to have so many choices so I hope you'll check it out <3
the artwork in this game is amazing! I find the atmosphere genuinely jarring and suspenseful, even the creepy piano music is a good touch! I can't wait to see where this story goes with Riker- also, Riker is super hot and I love him already. I'm definitely going to play nice with him at first. Please let me know if you get around to making a tumblr blog so I can follow you. <3 eagerly waiting for day 3~!
Thank you for checking out my day 2 update! <3 I'm planning on adding a bunch of branching choices so there will be plenty of ways of interacting with him :3 And of course! Once I get all my socials in place I'll send out an update. Thank you again :D
I want to ask, will there be any nsfw scenes? Like sex scenes? lol
I do plan on having certain routes contain sexual scenes c:
you are a lovely gem~
Oh my goodness thank you <33 I'm happy that you found it disturbing, I'm wanting to make him appear more and more unhinged in certain routes so I'm glad it gave that kind of effect :3 and definitely sounds like something I would want to do, thank you for the advice! I've become quite a bit invested in this project ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ
Thank you for checking it out! I hope you enjoy <3