What a gem of a game ! I'm super excited for the fourth day to come out and also very intrigued about the other "bachelor" from discord (at least I assume it is him).
SPOILER!!!!
My first route was the one where he "suits himself" during the night. I immediately understood it was going to be a wild ride lol. I really like this kind of erotic genre with the realism you introduce in the protagonist's thoughts and reactions. It's nice to have such a safe medium to explore those fantasms.
Good luck for the next part and I apologize for my weird grammar since I'm not a native.
Your grammar is perfect! And thank you so much for checking out the game <3
I have some concepts for the second love interest and he'll be released once Riker's route is all wrapped up (:
And thank you so much <33 I tried putting in what I consider at least to be realistic choices and reactions so I'm really happy you think so. And yes exactly I love stories and games that have that kind of freaky and scary premise that would be absolutely terrifying in real life. It's my main drive for creating my own.
I'll have the next update out as soon as possible! :D
Oh man, I just played a good amount of "routes/endings" and I love how you can have vastly different dynamics with Riker in each one. Also, one of my favorite things in your game is how you change Riker's sprite art to show us his emotional/psychological state, I admit it's scared me more than once, haha.
I can't wait to see how each path unfolds, I'm especially excited for the conclusion of nearly all of the branches in the "Creep" route ("Kinky", "..." and "Declawed") and also "Doggy dad" because they're really hot and I enjoy the mix of being scared and horny. But I look forward to "Therapy" too, it hurt me and I loved it! I just wanted to hug him in that moment :((
Like other people have said, I would also enjoy learning more about Riker and their past. Was he always like this? Did something traumatic made him that way? I'm very intrigued by him.
Anyways! Thank you so much for your hard work!! :D
My hand is definitely hating me for how many times I've drawn him but I'm really glad that it's working out and that you enjoy all the different sprites <3 I wanted to make him more 'alive' and less static and I think the creepiness is better with more dynamic >:3
I hope I can create endings that are satisfactory for the routes but I'm definitely going to try my best and put my all in (・`ω´・ ●) It may take a bit because I definitely want to have more NSFW artwork for the more sexual endings and such and I don't want them to come off as corny or weird lookin'.
I'm definitely planning on spreading out bits of hit backstory across multiple endings to help paint a picture of why he is the way he is, kinda like how day 3 has bits explaining his obsession for the mc.
And thank you for all your support! You've been checking in on the game since I first posted, even the first commenter and it means the world to me <3
It made me super happy to read your reply <33! I actually wanted to say "Hey, it's me, the first commenter!" but I didn't believe you would recognize me and I didn't want to come across as a weirdo, haha!
I'm really happy that you found your crowd, and of course, take all the time you need! I'll wait and cheer for you!!
Oh my goodness you played them all? I know some of them are on the shorter side but thank you so much for checking it all out.
(˚ ˃̣̣̥⌓˂̣̣̥ ) <3333
I'm planning on fleshing out Day 4 so I hope it'll be satisfactory and give a good conclusion to all the different Day 3 endings. I'll work on the second ML's route after Riker's is done so it won't be completely over and I hope you'll check it all out then as well c:
I'm happy to hear it tugged on your heartstrings. Riker just needs some love yaknow? ╰(ɵ̥̥ ˑ̫ ɵ̥̥ ╰) <3
Found this from your reddit post, had to play it and really glad I did! First thing I like was that vast changes in each route. I love how creepy he gets in the close shots, like his eyes make me want to run away! So yeah I think Riker's the right mix of deranged and hot. Unsettling atmosphere and character, nailed.
One suggestion is that I'd like to learn more about Riker. I know the last day isn't out yet, and I don't necessarily need a deep dive into his entire history and why he's like... yknow how he is, but I would like to know more about what he does for a living, or what he likes(aside from MC lol) and dislikes. Maybe split up little tidbits behind each of the endings? That might have already been your plan lmao.
Thank you for taking the time to check out my game! And no that's really great advice thank you. I was planning on expanding in his reasoning for the way he is in certain routes but I do agree with you with giving him a bit more substance on him as an actual person. Job, background, etc. One thing I've been meaning to do is make a character sheet so I may just have to get one whipped up as well for some additional info.
I think it's a good start. I can definitely see the future plans to adding more characters through the Heroine/Hero, Riker, and the Lion-Phone guy.
I do find the start a bit rushed in. It's nice to have some ambiance, fluff, and backstory to give the Hero/Heroine some character that's not from just from choice boxes alone. Some people might hate it, I think its a personality builder. You always got to balance the aspects of the story. It might also add some unexpended moments for Riker and perhaps some other love interests if there are plans for them. We do have context that she's independent and is working a bar-restaurant and we have a friend in the phone. But other than that, you can definitely expand a bit on that.
Riker has a great start off. Starts off as a customer, turns and whisks you off. As we continue to spend time with him and depending on the choices given, he can be unpredictable, obsessive, and unsettling. I do find the mini-jump scares interesting. It gives him a sense of mysteriousness that there is something more to him that is missing.
Hopefully in the future update you'll expand upon that idea.
First of all, I want to thank you for the time you put into your feedback. I agree with you, the beginning does feel a bit rushed and was technically slapped together as I was learning the ropes of the game engine. Once I have day 4 finished I'll go back and see about adding some more substance to the beginning, see if I can add some more atmosphere and character building as well as different events to hook interest.
I wanted to make Riker an absolute mess of a person internally that can go from one extreme to the next depending on how you respond to him.
Thank you for your input and I'll definitely keep it in mind while I continue the game as well as when I go back and apply finishing touches <3
Riker gives me the creeps/hots at the same time, I love the ominous atmosphere and his 'very' obsessive nature. That scene with the crying was big yikes, I loved it. :D It's quite rare to find dark themed stories like this. Makes me hope for some nsfw scenes.. will there actually be some with Riker? Cannot wait for more regardless!
Hey thank you so much for checking out my game <3 yes I am planning on putting in nsfw scenes with him :3 I'm happy he's giving off those feelings cause I've always loved them myself in stories I've read/games I've played so I definitely wanted to capture that obsessive nature in him. I'll have more out shortly and thank you again ´･ᴗ･`
The use of zoom-ins got me sooo many times. The first use in the bar I was like :O and then I played through my way. On repeat I did a different situation in the bunker and when he jumped into our face again I was like OoO ahaha Love the art style and the ambience it brings to the already interesting text lines!!
Oh gosh thank you so much <333 I'm happy you like it so far, I definitely want to give him the right mixture of hot and creepy af xD Day three is in the works and I'll have an update for the release date soon :3
Played this last night and just had to comment as soon as I got off work today. Riker is so scary😂especially the part where MC is crying. It was exciting tho oops. I'm looking forward to seeing more!
That route is going to be something special :3 at least what have planned for it I hope it will be C": I'm glad you liked it. I'll have it out as soon as possible! Day 3 is going to have so many choices so I hope you'll check it out <3
the artwork in this game is amazing! I find the atmosphere genuinely jarring and suspenseful, even the creepy piano music is a good touch! I can't wait to see where this story goes with Riker- also, Riker is super hot and I love him already. I'm definitely going to play nice with him at first. Please let me know if you get around to making a tumblr blog so I can follow you. <3 eagerly waiting for day 3~!
Thank you for checking out my day 2 update! <3 I'm planning on adding a bunch of branching choices so there will be plenty of ways of interacting with him :3 And of course! Once I get all my socials in place I'll send out an update. Thank you again :D
Oh my goodness thank you <33 I'm happy that you found it disturbing, I'm wanting to make him appear more and more unhinged in certain routes so I'm glad it gave that kind of effect :3 and definitely sounds like something I would want to do, thank you for the advice! I've become quite a bit invested in this project ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ
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What a gem of a game ! I'm super excited for the fourth day to come out and also very intrigued about the other "bachelor" from discord (at least I assume it is him).
SPOILER!!!!
My first route was the one where he "suits himself" during the night. I immediately understood it was going to be a wild ride lol. I really like this kind of erotic genre with the realism you introduce in the protagonist's thoughts and reactions. It's nice to have such a safe medium to explore those fantasms.
Good luck for the next part and I apologize for my weird grammar since I'm not a native.
Your grammar is perfect! And thank you so much for checking out the game <3
I have some concepts for the second love interest and he'll be released once Riker's route is all wrapped up (:
And thank you so much <33 I tried putting in what I consider at least to be realistic choices and reactions so I'm really happy you think so. And yes exactly I love stories and games that have that kind of freaky and scary premise that would be absolutely terrifying in real life. It's my main drive for creating my own.
I'll have the next update out as soon as possible! :D
Oh man, I just played a good amount of "routes/endings" and I love how you can have vastly different dynamics with Riker in each one. Also, one of my favorite things in your game is how you change Riker's sprite art to show us his emotional/psychological state, I admit it's scared me more than once, haha.
I can't wait to see how each path unfolds, I'm especially excited for the conclusion of nearly all of the branches in the "Creep" route ("Kinky", "..." and "Declawed") and also "Doggy dad" because they're really hot and I enjoy the mix of being scared and horny. But I look forward to "Therapy" too, it hurt me and I loved it! I just wanted to hug him in that moment :((
Like other people have said, I would also enjoy learning more about Riker and their past. Was he always like this? Did something traumatic made him that way? I'm very intrigued by him.
Anyways! Thank you so much for your hard work!! :D
My hand is definitely hating me for how many times I've drawn him but I'm really glad that it's working out and that you enjoy all the different sprites <3 I wanted to make him more 'alive' and less static and I think the creepiness is better with more dynamic >:3
I hope I can create endings that are satisfactory for the routes but I'm definitely going to try my best and put my all in (・`ω´・ ●) It may take a bit because I definitely want to have more NSFW artwork for the more sexual endings and such and I don't want them to come off as corny or weird lookin'.
I'm definitely planning on spreading out bits of hit backstory across multiple endings to help paint a picture of why he is the way he is, kinda like how day 3 has bits explaining his obsession for the mc.
And thank you for all your support! You've been checking in on the game since I first posted, even the first commenter and it means the world to me <3
It made me super happy to read your reply <33! I actually wanted to say "Hey, it's me, the first commenter!" but I didn't believe you would recognize me and I didn't want to come across as a weirdo, haha!
I'm really happy that you found your crowd, and of course, take all the time you need! I'll wait and cheer for you!!
No not at all you are so very appreciated <3 it's my first time putting my work out like this so your comment had me like O:
And thank you again so much :3 I'll do my best to create content that you'll enjoy!
Oh my goodness you played them all? I know some of them are on the shorter side but thank you so much for checking it all out.
(˚ ˃̣̣̥⌓˂̣̣̥ ) <3333
I'm planning on fleshing out Day 4 so I hope it'll be satisfactory and give a good conclusion to all the different Day 3 endings. I'll work on the second ML's route after Riker's is done so it won't be completely over and I hope you'll check it all out then as well c:
I'm happy to hear it tugged on your heartstrings. Riker just needs some love yaknow? ╰(ɵ̥̥ ˑ̫ ɵ̥̥ ╰) <3
Found this from your reddit post, had to play it and really glad I did! First thing I like was that vast changes in each route. I love how creepy he gets in the close shots, like his eyes make me want to run away! So yeah I think Riker's the right mix of deranged and hot. Unsettling atmosphere and character, nailed.
One suggestion is that I'd like to learn more about Riker. I know the last day isn't out yet, and I don't necessarily need a deep dive into his entire history and why he's like... yknow how he is, but I would like to know more about what he does for a living, or what he likes(aside from MC lol) and dislikes. Maybe split up little tidbits behind each of the endings? That might have already been your plan lmao.
Thank you for taking the time to check out my game! And no that's really great advice thank you. I was planning on expanding in his reasoning for the way he is in certain routes but I do agree with you with giving him a bit more substance on him as an actual person. Job, background, etc. One thing I've been meaning to do is make a character sheet so I may just have to get one whipped up as well for some additional info.
For the content the game has so far,
I think it's a good start. I can definitely see the future plans to adding more characters through the Heroine/Hero, Riker, and the Lion-Phone guy.
I do find the start a bit rushed in. It's nice to have some ambiance, fluff, and backstory to give the Hero/Heroine some character that's not from just from choice boxes alone. Some people might hate it, I think its a personality builder. You always got to balance the aspects of the story. It might also add some unexpended moments for Riker and perhaps some other love interests if there are plans for them. We do have context that she's independent and is working a bar-restaurant and we have a friend in the phone. But other than that, you can definitely expand a bit on that.
Riker has a great start off. Starts off as a customer, turns and whisks you off. As we continue to spend time with him and depending on the choices given, he can be unpredictable, obsessive, and unsettling. I do find the mini-jump scares interesting. It gives him a sense of mysteriousness that there is something more to him that is missing.
Hopefully in the future update you'll expand upon that idea.
First of all, I want to thank you for the time you put into your feedback. I agree with you, the beginning does feel a bit rushed and was technically slapped together as I was learning the ropes of the game engine. Once I have day 4 finished I'll go back and see about adding some more substance to the beginning, see if I can add some more atmosphere and character building as well as different events to hook interest.
I wanted to make Riker an absolute mess of a person internally that can go from one extreme to the next depending on how you respond to him.
Thank you for your input and I'll definitely keep it in mind while I continue the game as well as when I go back and apply finishing touches <3
Heeh, I'm really enjoying this so far! <3
Riker gives me the creeps/hots at the same time, I love the ominous atmosphere and his 'very' obsessive nature. That scene with the crying was big yikes, I loved it. :D It's quite rare to find dark themed stories like this. Makes me hope for some nsfw scenes.. will there actually be some with Riker? Cannot wait for more regardless!
Hey thank you so much for checking out my game <3 yes I am planning on putting in nsfw scenes with him :3 I'm happy he's giving off those feelings cause I've always loved them myself in stories I've read/games I've played so I definitely wanted to capture that obsessive nature in him. I'll have more out shortly and thank you again ´･ᴗ･`
THIS IS AMAZING
The use of zoom-ins got me sooo many times. The first use in the bar I was like :O and then I played through my way. On repeat I did a different situation in the bunker and when he jumped into our face again I was like OoO ahaha Love the art style and the ambience it brings to the already interesting text lines!!
Oh gosh thank you so much <333 I'm happy you like it so far, I definitely want to give him the right mixture of hot and creepy af xD Day three is in the works and I'll have an update for the release date soon :3
is the lion guy i was texting and riker the same person ?
The Lion guy you're texting is the second love interest that isn't available yet. I'll start working on his route once I've finished Riker's route. (:
I'm really enjoying this, it's unsettling and enthralling, great job! I can't wait for the next installment!
Thank you for checking out my game! :D I'm currently working on Day 3 and will have it out as soon as possible :3
Played this last night and just had to comment as soon as I got off work today. Riker is so scary😂especially the part where MC is crying. It was exciting tho oops. I'm looking forward to seeing more!
That route is going to be something special :3 at least what have planned for it I hope it will be C": I'm glad you liked it. I'll have it out as soon as possible! Day 3 is going to have so many choices so I hope you'll check it out <3
the artwork in this game is amazing! I find the atmosphere genuinely jarring and suspenseful, even the creepy piano music is a good touch! I can't wait to see where this story goes with Riker- also, Riker is super hot and I love him already. I'm definitely going to play nice with him at first. Please let me know if you get around to making a tumblr blog so I can follow you. <3 eagerly waiting for day 3~!
Thank you for checking out my day 2 update! <3 I'm planning on adding a bunch of branching choices so there will be plenty of ways of interacting with him :3 And of course! Once I get all my socials in place I'll send out an update. Thank you again :D
I want to ask, will there be any nsfw scenes? Like sex scenes? lol
I do plan on having certain routes contain sexual scenes c:
you are a lovely gem~
Oh my goodness thank you <33 I'm happy that you found it disturbing, I'm wanting to make him appear more and more unhinged in certain routes so I'm glad it gave that kind of effect :3 and definitely sounds like something I would want to do, thank you for the advice! I've become quite a bit invested in this project ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ
Thank you for checking it out! I hope you enjoy <3